Marshmallow People ~Awarded~
Marshmallow People nostrils flair inhaling the scent of marshmallow peopleempty calories bad for the brainbut man oh man what a sugar rushmemorized by endorphin dancing feet caught in the cool...
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LadyRaine, this is truly inspired. Your metaphor is a home run out of the park. We are addicted to the sugar high even though we know it is fake sucrose. You weave this idea into a scintillating poem....
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for a moment you doubtfor a moment you doubtyour new sucrose way of lifebut then you decide its worth the price andthe things you need to really surviveyour new sucrose way of lifeI I suppose we all,...
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sometimes late at night when you can’t sleep and your truthsdemand some kind of understandingand your sanity teeters on the realitiesof what you truly need to feel alivefor a moment you doubtyour new...
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Oh what a tasty poem 'ive such a sweet tooth makes me enjoy this gem of a poem even more try listen to a Lou Reed song called 'Egg Cream ' , the song sprung to mind when i read this beauty
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goldenmyst wrote:LadyRaine, this is truly inspired. Your metaphor is a home run out of the park. We are addicted to the sugar high even though we know it is fake sucrose. You weave this idea into a...
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Camarosc35 wrote:for a moment you doubtfor a moment you doubtyour new sucrose way of lifebut then you decide its worth the price andthe things you need to really surviveyour new sucrose way of lifeI I...
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Tlainya wrote:sometimes late at night when you can’t sleep and your truthsdemand some kind of understandingand your sanity teeters on the realitiesof what you truly need to feel alivefor a moment you...
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braveheart bard wrote:Oh what a tasty poem 'ive such a sweet tooth makes me enjoy this gem of a poem even more try listen to a Lou Reed song called 'Egg Cream ' , the song sprung to mind when i read...
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This is wonderful Rox, maybe I see something a bit different than was even intended but a single thought crossed my mind at the end of it, When the sugar coating comes off the truth, then what? Then...
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Birds see things others don't, excellent catch my feathered friend, **smiles*
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i was drawn in by the title......and i am glad i am here.....i have to tell you a little story.....we rescued a yellow and orange cat....his name is Cheese and he is so appreciative of his home....in...
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I like the deeper meanings of this piece.. reminds me of times in a life, when everything just seems perfect... this sugar-coated world of yours is very appealing, Dan
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You shouldn't be surprised by the replies Sweet Friend, You are, and have Always been, an Excellent Poet, and there sure is much more than sugar coating to this gem... Bravo!!! I agree with Tara as...
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Whether love or dessert, this poem is totally sweet. I heard a poet once (Live reading) call gas-station roses the "saran-wrapped Twinkies of love," or something very close. I was immediately reminded...
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draculaswoman wrote:i was drawn in by the title......and i am glad i am here.....i have to tell you a little story.....we rescued a yellow and orange cat....his name is Cheese and he is so...
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passionaterider wrote:You shouldn't be surprised by the replies Sweet Friend, You are, and have Always been, an Excellent Poet, and there sure is much more than sugar coating to this gem... Bravo!!! I...
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AquarianM wrote:Whether love or dessert, this poem is totally sweet. I heard a poet once (Live reading) call gas-station roses the "saran-wrapped Twinkies of love," or something very close. I was...
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We all have that thing that will break us huh? Sugar ... chocolate ... pizza ... whatever it is, we cannot resist it without a fight. :) I loved this, Rox!
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janmew wrote:We all have that thing that will break us huh? Sugar ... chocolate ... pizza ... whatever it is, we cannot resist it without a fight. :) I loved this, Rox!indeed we do Jan, I always say...
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